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Summer Stream

cool waters gurgling across seven soft sandstones coy crawdads cache written January 17, 2022 written for "Nature Haiku with Alliteration" Poetry Contest sponsored by Tania Kitchin syllables checked by PS

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/18/2022 7:52:00 AM

A perfect nature haiku with alliteration Milton. Good luck in the contest. Tom

L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/18/2022 7:59:00 AM

Thanks so much, Tom.

Karen Croft

Date: 1/18/2022 2:07:00 AM

i would definitely be there to listen and watch. this is right up my alley!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/18/2022 7:59:00 AM

It would be lots of fun I think, Karen.

Bill Baker

Date: 1/17/2022 10:35:00 PM

Should do well in the contest, great alliteration Haiku. Bill

L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/18/2022 8:00:00 AM

Hopefully, Bill. Thanks so much for your confidence.