Summer Storm

Rainfall
In the sunlight
A shimmering cascade
We both stand speechless for a few
Heartbeats
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Smith Avatar
April 6, 2012 at 11:46 AM
Excellent write
Brown Avatar
April 2, 2012 at 8:52 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jim. Love, Carol
Strand Avatar
September 1, 2008 at 12:07 AM
Lyrical writing Jim.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Burton Avatar
August 2, 2008 at 12:59 PM
wow, thats love.very silent and knowing great poem.
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July 29, 2008 at 4:34 PM
Creative use of this short format. You can send a little rain our way. It's hot and windy in North Dakota and things dry out fast. Nice imagery. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
Richards Avatar
July 29, 2008 at 11:06 AM
Beautiful images. Mother Nature really can take our breaths away....she can paint a picture like no other!! Lovely! ....Fondly, Carrie
Degenhardt Avatar
July 29, 2008 at 10:58 AM
Excellent form, Jim and love the content and visuals in this read. Michael
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