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Summer Storm

Rainfall In the sunlight A shimmering cascade We both stand speechless for a few Heartbeats

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Michael Smith

Date: 4/6/2012 11:46:00 AM

Excellent write

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/2/2012 8:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jim. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

Date: 9/1/2008 12:07:00 AM

Lyrical writing Jim.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Derrick Burton

Date: 8/2/2008 12:59:00 PM

wow, thats love.very silent and knowing great poem.

Date: 7/29/2008 4:34:00 PM

Creative use of this short format. You can send a little rain our way. It's hot and windy in North Dakota and things dry out fast. Nice imagery. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/29/2008 11:06:00 AM

Beautiful images. Mother Nature really can take our breaths away....she can paint a picture like no other!! Lovely! ....Fondly, Carrie

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 7/29/2008 10:58:00 AM

Excellent form, Jim and love the content and visuals in this read. Michael