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Summer Sparkles

The sun is low among the branches Of my emerald picture tree, And there among the leaves it dances With the summer breeze set free. The light then shines through curtain lace, Which lets beams in in flashes, Falls upon my upturned face— Makes rainbows on my lashes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/19/2010 3:35:00 AM
Love the visuals behind this one Felicity - regards Wilma
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Date: 5/19/2010 3:14:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Felicity. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/19/2010 2:54:00 AM
enjoyed your poetry, very vivid,..p.d.
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