Summer Sky

sun, ripe citrus fruit
sapphire sky flecked with white clouds
tarmac road steaming

June.26.2022

Summer Nature Themed 
Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Sara Kendrick

July 8, 2022 at 3:14 AM

Very descriptive of a summer afternoon. Congrats on this winner. Way to go. Sara

Len Gasun

July 5, 2022 at 7:33 AM

Sun, ripe citrus fruit. Wow! So beautiful. I love sun and your haiku. Congratulations on your win my dear friend Valsa! Thanks for sharing. Hugs!

Andrea Dietrich

July 4, 2022 at 4:51 PM

Back with my congrats. Such great images.

Tania Kitchin

July 4, 2022 at 7:54 AM

Valsa, congratulations on your winning placement with your colorful haiku!

Valsa George

July 4, 2022 at 8:16 AM

Thanks a lot Tania for giving this opportunity and choosing my poem for a win !

Malabika Ray Choudhury

July 4, 2022 at 6:18 AM

Congratulations on your win with this beautiful haiku, Dear Valsa. sun, sapphire sky, citrus fruits, and steaming tarmac road - all perfect picture of summer. Truly appreciate your visit and kind comments on my page. Feel blessed ~ Mala

Valsa George

July 4, 2022 at 8:21 AM

Unfortunately many have mistaken the citrus fruit ! I actually meant 'sun is a ripe citrus fruit in the sky' yellow or bright golden in color. If I had put 'a' the confusion could have been averted. However thanks a lot Mala for your kind comment !

Christuraj Alex

July 4, 2022 at 4:53 AM

" ripe citrus fruit" - Great metaphor. Congratulations!

Susan Ashley

June 28, 2022 at 7:39 PM

Dearest Valsa, your brilliant imagery captures the colors, beauty and heat of the summer sky and earth with poetic finesse. I adore your creative and eloquent pen, "sun, ripe citrus fruit" - magnifique! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan