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sun, ripe citrus fruit sapphire sky flecked with white clouds tarmac road steaming June.26.2022 Summer Nature Themed Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/8/2022 3:14:00 AM

Very descriptive of a summer afternoon. Congrats on this winner. Way to go. Sara

Len Gasun

Date: 7/5/2022 7:33:00 AM

Sun, ripe citrus fruit. Wow! So beautiful. I love sun and your haiku. Congratulations on your win my dear friend Valsa! Thanks for sharing. Hugs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2022 4:51:00 PM

Back with my congrats. Such great images.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/4/2022 7:54:00 AM

Valsa, congratulations on your winning placement with your colorful haiku!

Valsa George
Date: 7/4/2022 8:16:00 AM

Thanks a lot Tania for giving this opportunity and choosing my poem for a win !

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 7/4/2022 6:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this beautiful haiku, Dear Valsa. sun, sapphire sky, citrus fruits, and steaming tarmac road - all perfect picture of summer. Truly appreciate your visit and kind comments on my page. Feel blessed ~ Mala

Valsa George
Date: 7/4/2022 8:21:00 AM

Unfortunately many have mistaken the citrus fruit ! I actually meant 'sun is a ripe citrus fruit in the sky' yellow or bright golden in color. If I had put 'a' the confusion could have been averted. However thanks a lot Mala for your kind comment !

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/4/2022 4:53:00 AM

" ripe citrus fruit" - Great metaphor. Congratulations!

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/28/2022 7:39:00 PM

Dearest Valsa, your brilliant imagery captures the colors, beauty and heat of the summer sky and earth with poetic finesse. I adore your creative and eloquent pen, "sun, ripe citrus fruit" - magnifique! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/27/2022 1:57:00 AM

The citrus love the sun provided it is occasionally given water. Lovely haiku.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 6/26/2022 6:01:00 PM

Phoenix in July! Enjoyed! Aloha!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/26/2022 4:06:00 PM

Bejweled poem 3 lines that shine brightly dear Valsa, winning wishes for a wonderful spot on the podium,

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2022 12:30:00 PM

great job . The last line really lets us know how hot it is!!

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/26/2022 6:45:00 AM

Such a beautiful Haiku with profound meaning about summer exotic fruits is beyond perfection, Valsa. Have a great weekend

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/26/2022 6:42:00 AM

Images in summer you convey bring forth the hues. Great observation. Best to you, Valsa.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/26/2022 4:39:00 AM

Exotic fruit, indeed, ripe to perfection, dearest, Valsa. Good luck! Blessings!