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Summer Sky

sun, ripe citrus fruit
sapphire sky flecked with white clouds
tarmac road steaming

June.26.2022

Summer Nature Themed 
Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

Copyright © Valsa George | Year Posted 2022

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Sara Kendrick Date: 7/8/2022 3:14:00 AM Very descriptive of a summer afternoon. Congrats on this winner. Way to go. Sara Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 7/5/2022 7:33:00 AM Sun, ripe citrus fruit. Wow! So beautiful. I love sun and your haiku. Congratulations on your win my dear friend Valsa! Thanks for sharing. Hugs! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/4/2022 4:51:00 PM Back with my congrats. Such great images. Login to Reply

Tania Kitchin Date: 7/4/2022 7:54:00 AM Valsa, congratulations on your winning placement with your colorful haiku! Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 7/4/2022 8:16:00 AM Thanks a lot Tania for giving this opportunity and choosing my poem for a win !

Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 7/4/2022 6:18:00 AM Congratulations on your win with this beautiful haiku, Dear Valsa. sun, sapphire sky, citrus fruits, and steaming tarmac road - all perfect picture of summer. Truly appreciate your visit and kind comments on my page. Feel blessed ~ Mala Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 7/4/2022 8:21:00 AM Unfortunately many have mistaken the citrus fruit ! I actually meant 'sun is a ripe citrus fruit in the sky' yellow or bright golden in color. If I had put 'a' the confusion could have been averted. However thanks a lot Mala for your kind comment !

Christuraj Alex Date: 7/4/2022 4:53:00 AM " ripe citrus fruit" - Great metaphor. Congratulations! Login to Reply

Susan Ashley Date: 6/28/2022 7:39:00 PM Dearest Valsa, your brilliant imagery captures the colors, beauty and heat of the summer sky and earth with poetic finesse. I adore your creative and eloquent pen, "sun, ripe citrus fruit" - magnifique! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 6/27/2022 1:57:00 AM The citrus love the sun provided it is occasionally given water. Lovely haiku. Login to Reply

Rico Leffanta Date: 6/26/2022 6:01:00 PM Phoenix in July! Enjoyed! Aloha! Login to Reply

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 6/26/2022 4:06:00 PM Bejweled poem 3 lines that shine brightly dear Valsa, winning wishes for a wonderful spot on the podium, Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/26/2022 12:30:00 PM great job . The last line really lets us know how hot it is!! Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 6/26/2022 6:45:00 AM Such a beautiful Haiku with profound meaning about summer exotic fruits is beyond perfection, Valsa. Have a great weekend Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 6/26/2022 6:42:00 AM Images in summer you convey bring forth the hues. Great observation. Best to you, Valsa. Login to Reply

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 6/26/2022 4:39:00 AM Exotic fruit, indeed, ripe to perfection, dearest, Valsa. Good luck! Blessings! Login to Reply