Summer Sins

Anonymous blue waves
Brown skin, sun, alcohol, lust
He tastes like salt, summer.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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June 19, 2016 at 7:47 PM
Oh my, i love the salt, summer. Unless you are talking about sweat. Lol...this is awesome for a haiku. Skat
Rockwell Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 8:20 PM
Thanks Skat!
Dietrich Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 7:57 PM
a yummy summer!!
Gazbowski Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 7:54 AM
Vivid imagery. Love the first line - Anonymous blue waves.
Rockwell Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 9:03 AM
Thank you.
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