Jean Murray Poet Diamante

Summer Shower

sun
                summer shower
             dark pregnant cloud
        large plops, rainbow forms
              short sharp burst
               heavy downpour
                        rain



15/06/2019
Sparkling Diamonds Poetry Contest
for Joseph May

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David Smith August 16, 2019 at 5:19 AM describes it perfectly. All the best David in NZ Jean Murray August 17, 2019 at 10:58 AM Hi David. Your weather is similar to ours over there. Thankfully we don't get the tropical stuff my sister endures in Queensland. Thanks for dropping in

Connie Marcum Wong July 7, 2019 at 1:58 PM I love this Jean. The rules were so specific guess that is why this was not on the list? Cheers, Connie Jean Murray July 8, 2019 at 1:41 AM Hi Connie. I like it more than others of mine. For a long time the sun refused to move to the centre of the top line. Maybe that's why it rained on my parade, prize wise??

P.S. Awtry June 17, 2019 at 11:59 AM summer days turn to showers pretty quickly don't they! Best of luck in the contest! (soupmail) P.S. Awtry June 18, 2019 at 4:06 PM woohoo! glad it worked! :) Jean Murray June 18, 2019 at 7:29 AM YABBADABBADOO! Thank YOU. Jean Murray June 17, 2019 at 12:06 PM P.S., my diamond has lost it's shiny top. I cannot get it to sparkle again. It must be a diamond in the rough. Thank you for letting me know.

Vijay Pandit June 16, 2019 at 7:34 AM Moodiness of summer rain--so well depicted in your poem, Jean.

Tom Cunningham June 16, 2019 at 4:31 AM Well done Jean, non stop rain for two weeks now. Heatwave on the way. Good luck. Tom