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SUMMER SHOWER

                       sun
                summer shower
             dark pregnant cloud
        large plops, rainbow forms
              short sharp burst
               heavy downpour
                        rain



15/06/2019
Sparkling Diamonds Poetry Contest
for Joseph May

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Date: 8/16/2019 5:19:00 AM
describes it perfectly. All the best David in NZ
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 8/17/2019 10:58:00 AM
Hi David. Your weather is similar to ours over there. Thankfully we don't get the tropical stuff my sister endures in Queensland. Thanks for dropping in
Date: 7/7/2019 1:58:00 PM
I love this Jean. The rules were so specific guess that is why this was not on the list? Cheers, Connie
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 7/8/2019 1:41:00 AM
Hi Connie. I like it more than others of mine. For a long time the sun refused to move to the centre of the top line. Maybe that's why it rained on my parade, prize wise??
Date: 6/17/2019 11:59:00 AM
summer days turn to showers pretty quickly don't they! Best of luck in the contest! (soupmail)
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P.S. AWTRY
Date: 6/18/2019 4:06:00 PM
woohoo! glad it worked! :)
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 6/18/2019 7:29:00 AM
YABBADABBADOO! Thank YOU.
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 6/17/2019 12:06:00 PM
P.S., my diamond has lost it's shiny top. I cannot get it to sparkle again. It must be a diamond in the rough. Thank you for letting me know.
Date: 6/16/2019 7:34:00 AM
Moodiness of summer rain--so well depicted in your poem, Jean.
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Date: 6/16/2019 4:31:00 AM
Well done Jean, non stop rain for two weeks now. Heatwave on the way. Good luck. Tom
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