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Summer Seranade

Red eyed tiny tree frogs whistling at dusk. Accompanied by croaking toads and crickets chirping loud. Gentle soft breeze tickles my ears in sync with rhythmic waves. Jumping fish splash now and then as they frolic for their prey. Bermuda sunset turns to night. The stars not hidden by city lights. The moon shimmers on fluorescent peaks as the ocean sparkles and splashes the beach. As I lie on the coral isle my senses are replete. This blissful summer serenade will soon woo me to sleep. A speck in the Ocean. July 2, 2016

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Date: 3/9/2017 9:50:00 AM
Makes me want to be there. Right now it is -25 degrees where I live. Brr!!
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Date: 3/5/2017 9:20:00 AM
You have pointed out the message so clear, poetic, original and with a fantastic imagery expression. Thank you for this lovely share friend. This is definitely a star content.
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Date: 3/5/2017 9:00:00 AM
This is beautiful and peaceful. Nice write, Susan. :)
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Date: 2/5/2017 12:07:00 PM
Bermuda, I'm sure these are some nice memories! A picture of the beach!
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Date: 1/30/2017 2:00:00 PM
Hi Susan!! This is so lovely and rhythmically descriptive...so smooth. Well done. Hugggs. Deb!! (Thanks for your visit and kindness). :)
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Date: 1/14/2017 11:59:00 PM
A great descriptive poem Susan, nature is so wonderful. Makes me wish I were there.
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Susan Palli
Date: 1/15/2017 10:24:00 AM
Thank you, Bruce! Wish i were there too!
Date: 7/31/2016 3:26:00 AM
Beautiful scene. We all must do our bit to keep these tranquil spots both real and imagined. Love last line so poinant. Best wishes David in NZ
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Susan Palli
Date: 8/1/2016 5:39:00 AM
Thanks, David!
Date: 7/20/2016 8:04:00 AM
Lovely poem, Susan. A great read. Excellent imagery.
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Susan Palli
Date: 7/31/2016 2:44:00 AM
Thank you, Cona!
Date: 7/5/2016 2:48:00 PM
A 7 for your winning poem, Susan! Janice
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Susan Palli
Date: 7/31/2016 2:44:00 AM
Thank you, Janice!

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