Summer Sensations

Ocean waves gently tickle the shattered shells,
Strident seagulls briefly pierce the balmy strand.
Luring summer seems to work its magic spells
Tiny toes explore the gentle grains of sand.



15.01.20

 Excerpt taken from 'summer rispetto contest'  13 July 2018

 Arbitrium Divisa 6 Poetry Contest - sponsored by Gregory Barden
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Marcum Wong Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 7:45 PM
This is beautiful Wendy. I love it! I can imagine a little one with their toes in the sand. Lovely! Congratulations on your win! xxoo
Watson Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 3:24 AM
You are always such an encouragement, Connie. Thank you so much for this kind feedback.
Barden Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 6:46 PM
This one got me with spring fever, Wendy - now I'm craving summer again, lol. Beautiful write - sincere congratulations for your 10th place in the Arbitrium Divisa 6 Poetry Contest! - The Bard
Watson Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 3:24 AM
What an honour! Thank you for your appreciation of this short verse which I wrote as a novice in the poetry field. I'm glad that it evoked pleasant summer sensations!
Bagnall Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 11:30 AM
Nicely rhymed, you paint the picture well.
Watson Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 11:39 AM
Thank you, Nick. I could do with being there right now. It's a nippy night in the UK!
Green Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 9:11 AM
This was enchantingly beautiful Wendy, I am sorry I missed this one. Best wishes in the contest.
Watson Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 11:38 AM
Thank you for this lovely comment,Chris.
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