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summer sensations

Ocean waves gently tickle the shattered shells, Strident seagulls briefly pierce the balmy strand. Luring summer seems to work its magic spells Tiny toes explore the gentle grains of sand. 15.01.20 Excerpt taken from 'summer rispetto contest' 13 July 2018 Arbitrium Divisa 6 Poetry Contest - sponsored by Gregory Barden

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Date: 1/27/2020 7:45:00 PM
This is beautiful Wendy. I love it! I can imagine a little one with their toes in the sand. Lovely! Congratulations on your win! xxoo
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Wendy Watson
Date: 1/28/2020 3:24:00 AM
You are always such an encouragement, Connie. Thank you so much for this kind feedback.
Date: 1/27/2020 6:46:00 PM
This one got me with spring fever, Wendy - now I'm craving summer again, lol. Beautiful write - sincere congratulations for your 10th place in the Arbitrium Divisa 6 Poetry Contest! - The Bard
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Wendy Watson
Date: 1/28/2020 3:24:00 AM
What an honour! Thank you for your appreciation of this short verse which I wrote as a novice in the poetry field. I'm glad that it evoked pleasant summer sensations!
Date: 1/20/2020 11:30:00 AM
Nicely rhymed, you paint the picture well.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 1/20/2020 11:39:00 AM
Thank you, Nick. I could do with being there right now. It's a nippy night in the UK!
Date: 1/17/2020 9:11:00 AM
This was enchantingly beautiful Wendy, I am sorry I missed this one. Best wishes in the contest.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 1/20/2020 11:38:00 AM
Thank you for this lovely comment,Chris.