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Summer Secrets

       water lilies
filled with moonlight…
    thirsty fireflies

Copyright © David Mohn | Year Posted 2016

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June 20, 2025 at 5:44 AM

Beautiful! Congrats!

Lenny Gazbowski

May 30, 2016 at 11:05 AM

congats !!!

Richard Lamoureux

May 29, 2016 at 10:19 AM

A perfect Haiku!

Charlotte Puddifoot

May 28, 2016 at 4:29 PM

this is a really lovely haiku, cute! congrats on your win in the contest

May 28, 2016 at 10:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

May 27, 2016 at 9:09 PM

this was really great, David. I almost think I should have placed it at third!! I did not know fireflies got thirsty!! But that was a cool image near the water lilies. congrats in my contest.

May 27, 2016 at 9:30 PM

thanks so much Andrea...I went a little abstract on this one with fireflies lighting up by drinking moonlight

Barbara Gorelick

May 27, 2016 at 12:27 PM

What a pretty picture. congrats on your win. BG

May 27, 2016 at 10:15 AM

This one is good, David... Congrats on your win :)

May 24, 2016 at 3:00 PM

'Tis a night beauty, David! Lovely!! Regards // paul

May 27, 2016 at 2:58 PM

Back with congratulations, David...well done!

May 21, 2016 at 3:13 PM

lovely imagery David good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

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