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water lilies filled with moonlight… thirsty fireflies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Date: 5/30/2016 11:05:00 AM
congats !!!
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Date: 5/29/2016 10:19:00 AM
A perfect Haiku!
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Date: 5/28/2016 4:29:00 PM
this is a really lovely haiku, cute! congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 5/28/2016 10:00:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/27/2016 9:09:00 PM
this was really great, David. I almost think I should have placed it at third!! I did not know fireflies got thirsty!! But that was a cool image near the water lilies. congrats in my contest.
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david mohn
Date: 5/27/2016 9:30:00 PM
thanks so much Andrea...I went a little abstract on this one with fireflies lighting up by drinking moonlight
Date: 5/27/2016 12:27:00 PM
What a pretty picture. congrats on your win. BG
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Date: 5/27/2016 10:15:00 AM
This one is good, David... Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 5/24/2016 3:00:00 PM
'Tis a night beauty, David! Lovely!! Regards // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/27/2016 2:58:00 PM
Back with congratulations, David...well done!
Date: 5/21/2016 3:13:00 PM
lovely imagery David good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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