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Summer Secrets

water lilies filled with moonlight… thirsty fireflies

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Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/30/2016 11:05:00 AM

congats !!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/29/2016 10:19:00 AM

A perfect Haiku!

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 5/28/2016 4:29:00 PM

this is a really lovely haiku, cute! congrats on your win in the contest

Jan Allison

Date: 5/28/2016 10:00:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/27/2016 9:09:00 PM

this was really great, David. I almost think I should have placed it at third!! I did not know fireflies got thirsty!! But that was a cool image near the water lilies. congrats in my contest.

David Mohn
Date: 5/27/2016 9:30:00 PM

thanks so much Andrea...I went a little abstract on this one with fireflies lighting up by drinking moonlight

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/27/2016 12:27:00 PM

What a pretty picture. congrats on your win. BG

Lukas Ficklin

Date: 5/27/2016 10:15:00 AM

This one is good, David... Congrats on your win :)

Paul Callus

Date: 5/24/2016 3:00:00 PM

'Tis a night beauty, David! Lovely!! Regards // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 5/27/2016 2:58:00 PM

Back with congratulations, David...well done!

Jan Allison

Date: 5/21/2016 3:13:00 PM

lovely imagery David good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx