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Summer Sanity

searing summer sun 
seeking seaside sanity 
sea breezes save Soul


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August 2, 2014
Form: Haiku
Dr. Ram Mehta
Sixth Place Win
Contest: Haiku "aha" moments by Regina Riddle

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Skat A

May 23, 2015 at 11:09 AM

LOVE THIS

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 14, 2014 at 8:26 AM

Wonderful Haiku Dr.Ram. Nice to see you here at the Soup once again. I have not been here for awhile. I have not been to any other site. I have just lost the ump to write. congrats on your win. Love, Carol

Sally Stevens

August 12, 2014 at 9:54 AM

Hi Dr. Mehta, Great usage of alliteration in this piece and your words express a deep truth. I want to thank you for reading my posting, but I'm going around in circles. I just joined this site and it's not easy to navigate. Can you please help?

Abdullah Alhemaidy

August 11, 2014 at 5:15 PM

Cool really cool!

Linda Jackson

August 9, 2014 at 5:15 AM

l like the alliteration. Brilliant. Best wishes

Sam Raj

August 9, 2014 at 4:55 AM

Namaste Dr. Ramji, This is an Alliterated Haiku which deserves a top notch placement. I have been reading all the winning Haikus! I find the interpretation of structure has been democratised. Thanks for sharing