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Summer Sanity

searing summer sun 
seeking seaside sanity 
sea breezes save Soul


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August 2, 2014
Form: Haiku
Dr. Ram Mehta
Sixth Place Win
Contest: Haiku "aha" moments by Regina Riddle

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Skat A Date: 5/23/2015 11:09:00 AM LOVE THIS Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/14/2014 8:26:00 AM Wonderful Haiku Dr.Ram. Nice to see you here at the Soup once again. I have not been here for awhile. I have not been to any other site. I have just lost the ump to write. congrats on your win. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Sally Stevens Date: 8/12/2014 9:54:00 AM Hi Dr. Mehta, Great usage of alliteration in this piece and your words express a deep truth. I want to thank you for reading my posting, but I'm going around in circles. I just joined this site and it's not easy to navigate. Can you please help? Login to Reply

Abdullah Alhemaidy Date: 8/11/2014 5:15:00 PM Cool really cool! Login to Reply

Linda Jackson Date: 8/9/2014 5:15:00 AM l like the alliteration. Brilliant. Best wishes Login to Reply

Sam Raj Date: 8/9/2014 4:55:00 AM Namaste Dr. Ramji, This is an Alliterated Haiku which deserves a top notch placement. I have been reading all the winning Haikus! I find the interpretation of structure has been democratised. Thanks for sharing Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/8/2014 8:20:00 PM a cool alliterative one. BIG congrats on your win. Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 8/8/2014 3:56:00 PM The delightful breeze, saving grieve. Fine poetic message Dr. Ram, and a lovely congrats Sir, James.... Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/8/2014 2:34:00 PM impressive ku and alliterism, dr ram.. huge congrats!.. huggs Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/8/2014 11:50:00 AM - Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 8/8/2014 11:04:00 AM wonderful alliteration a worthy winner:-) Hugs jan xxx Login to Reply

Abdul Malik Date: 8/8/2014 8:41:00 AM I like this! Login to Reply

Craig Glenister Date: 8/8/2014 12:46:00 AM Took me home.Thank you Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 8/7/2014 1:47:00 PM Hi doc! Oh the power of an ocean breeze. It does seem to cleanse the soul...Wonderful to read your work again. Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 8/6/2014 8:24:00 AM Excellent haiku where alliteration takes centre stage. gl in Regins's contest. // paul Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 8/8/2014 2:56:00 PM ....back to give you congratulations.

Tim Smith Date: 8/3/2014 6:54:00 PM love the alliteration Dr Ram....cheers Tim Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 8/3/2014 9:16:00 AM Very lovely haiku Dr Ram! Login to Reply