Beautiful Scars Poet Rispetto

Summer Rispetto

Toes dipped in the emerald ocean with ease,
             I linger into the warm sunlight’s splendor.
All my hopelessness and woe begin to cease,
    my skin embraces the soft sand so tender. 
Then the thrilled family meets with pulchritude, 
                as hamburgers and hotdogs are barbequed. 
We enjoy Papa’s cottage in Summertime, 
           for the ardor of this season is sublime.
 



Picture Me a Summer Rispetto
Barry Stebbings
Rhyme Scheme: A-B-A-B-C-C-D-D
11 syllables in each line
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Date Written:July 26, 2018

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Susan Gentry August 7, 2018 at 5:10 AM Congratulations on your win. Sounds amazing!

Eve Roper August 6, 2018 at 2:26 AM Nicely done, Laura, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Anisha Dutta July 29, 2018 at 8:15 AM So nice place for family gathering. All the best. Beautiful Scars July 29, 2018 at 10:42 AM thank you sweet Anisha :)-luloo

John Gondolf July 26, 2018 at 7:14 AM This sounds like a wonderful place to spend the summer, Luloo, best of luck. John Beautiful Scars July 29, 2018 at 10:42 AM many thanks dear John :)-luloo

Caren Krutsinger July 26, 2018 at 7:14 AM You have painted a beautiful summer rispetto as if on a canvas, Laura. Well done! Beautiful Scars July 29, 2018 at 10:42 AM thankyou sweet Caren! :)-luloo

Kim Rodrigues July 26, 2018 at 6:52 AM Something soothing about the ocean...life giving. GL in contest, sweet Luloo! Beautiful Scars July 29, 2018 at 10:41 AM thank you dear lady :)-luloo