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Summer Returned

Summer returned unexpectedly in the form of a bumblebee It buzzed everywhere as surprised as I... then put its stinger away ~ watched the day go by

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/31/2022 12:56:00 PM

This is an interesting buzz.

Howard Kerr

Date: 10/29/2022 11:22:00 PM

Gordon, this is a thought-provoking and nuanced work which leaves a myriad of conclusions to the reader. I’m impressed. Many thanks for your comment on my latest Footle. Howard

Michael Tor

Date: 10/26/2022 6:07:00 AM

I wish he would have stayed Gershon. Any extra days of summer are always welcomed...

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 10/25/2022 4:28:00 PM

Pleasantly surprised!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/25/2022 7:28:00 PM

Glad you like this little bizz-buzz of a poem, Shirley.

Elizabeth Mccann

Date: 10/25/2022 2:56:00 PM

Love that "surprised as I!" I have a trio of tiny butterflies that do the same, have a look at me and then carry on gathering. elizabeth

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/25/2022 7:28:00 PM

My surprised eye is getting a bit tired tonight. I'll have to shift to the other one soon. (Why do you think I have two eyes? ~ Shift Worker).

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/25/2022 5:29:00 AM

Love the end…lol!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/25/2022 7:33:00 PM

I'll work on the beginning next time too. lol. Thanks, Kim