Winged Warrior Poet Ottava rima

Summer Rain

'The Thundering Silence'


The coming summer rain with drops of pain
Our lamenting love slowly slips away
My soul is slain with a thunderous vein
My heart left broken it begins to weigh
The tempered tears will drain as they detain
My longing for you on this summers spray
Thru the summer storm my love will transform
I look to the rainbow a welcome warm...
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Angels in flight within great holy height
Looking for your love a heavenly view
Bringers of light they have you in their sight
My love divine from them is overdue
Scribing angels write of my lonely night
After the storm a rainbows hue  they flew
A summer rain remind that I may find
My lost love now a caressing entwined.





Aug.21.2017
SUMMER RAIN STORM
Sponsored by: Dale Gregory Cozart 


One Ottava Rima, 8-16 lines
Your rhyme must be abababcc, with ten syllables per line.

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Darlene De Beaulieu September 5, 2017 at 9:00 AM The falling rain are your tears.Because your tears has ceased to shed. You are now beginning to heal. A lovely poem. Have a nice day my friend.

Anna Hopper September 1, 2017 at 7:21 AM Beautiful poem!

Robert Lindley August 24, 2017 at 10:39 PM Your brush painted a canvas beauty my friend. Sad it may be but life promises future joy and happiness. Every verse a gem..... A fav....

Maria Williams August 24, 2017 at 12:51 AM Such a wonderful poem, a winner in my eyes already, not that you need it but Good luck my friend...Maria

Freddie Robinson Jr. August 22, 2017 at 2:04 PM Beautiful poem, WW. This poem fits so well w/your pseudonym. A bright halo write by your talented pen. Romantic embroidered prose knitted perfectly. Excellent poetry. Love and peace always.

Connie Marcum Wong August 22, 2017 at 12:49 PM This entry is very lovely. The angels will always help if asked. I hope this will be a top winner for you. Beautiful! : )

Russell Sivey August 22, 2017 at 6:20 AM Awesome write my friend, such a fabulous and tremendous show of skill! You have transformed your Ottava Rima into a spectacular poem, with such a deliverance of speech, that exudes a powerful spell! I really loved reading this exciting poem this morning, Great Work WW!!

Joanna Daniel August 22, 2017 at 4:11 AM This is the second amazing entry I've read so far, ^WW^, should do well:)

Darren White August 22, 2017 at 12:58 AM WW, wonderfully done. Ottava rima is quite hard to do right, but you did it. Good luck in the contest :)

Eve Roper August 21, 2017 at 8:16 PM ^WW^, love all the colorful vision and so very romantic.. I'm going to have to try the form; good luck in the contest. ~*

Vijay Pandit August 21, 2017 at 7:23 PM A lovely Ottava rima WW--so much beauty in this summer rain love poem!