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Summer Rain

'The Thundering Silence' The coming summer rain with drops of pain Our lamenting love slowly slips away My soul is slain with a thunderous vein My heart left broken it begins to weigh The tempered tears will drain as they detain My longing for you on this summers spray Thru the summer storm my love will transform I look to the rainbow a welcome warm... ~~~ Angels in flight within great holy height Looking for your love a heavenly view Bringers of light they have you in their sight My love divine from them is overdue Scribing angels write of my lonely night After the storm a rainbows hue they flew A summer rain remind that I may find My lost love now a caressing entwined. Aug.21.2017 SUMMER RAIN STORM Sponsored by: Dale Gregory Cozart One Ottava Rima, 8-16 lines Your rhyme must be abababcc, with ten syllables per line.

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Date: 9/5/2017 9:00:00 AM
The falling rain are your tears.Because your tears has ceased to shed. You are now beginning to heal. A lovely poem. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 9/1/2017 7:21:00 AM
Beautiful poem!
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Date: 8/24/2017 10:39:00 PM
Your brush painted a canvas beauty my friend. Sad it may be but life promises future joy and happiness. Every verse a gem..... A fav....
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Date: 8/24/2017 12:51:00 AM
Such a wonderful poem, a winner in my eyes already, not that you need it but Good luck my friend...Maria
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Date: 8/22/2017 2:04:00 PM
Beautiful poem, WW. This poem fits so well w/your pseudonym. A bright halo write by your talented pen. Romantic embroidered prose knitted perfectly. Excellent poetry. Love and peace always.
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Date: 8/22/2017 12:49:00 PM
This entry is very lovely. The angels will always help if asked. I hope this will be a top winner for you. Beautiful! : )
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Date: 8/22/2017 6:20:00 AM
Awesome write my friend, such a fabulous and tremendous show of skill! You have transformed your Ottava Rima into a spectacular poem, with such a deliverance of speech, that exudes a powerful spell! I really loved reading this exciting poem this morning, Great Work WW!!
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Date: 8/22/2017 4:11:00 AM
This is the second amazing entry I've read so far, ^WW^, should do well:)
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Date: 8/22/2017 12:58:00 AM
WW, wonderfully done. Ottava rima is quite hard to do right, but you did it. Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 8/21/2017 8:16:00 PM
^WW^, love all the colorful vision and so very romantic.. I'm going to have to try the form; good luck in the contest. ~*
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Date: 8/21/2017 7:23:00 PM
A lovely Ottava rima WW--so much beauty in this summer rain love poem!
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