Premiere Contest WinnerSummer Rain

SUMMER CALL OF LIGHTNING BUGS AND RAIN At dusk of Spring, the lightning buzz of bugs. The sinkhole drain of creeks, its bed - depressed. What hell has issued this? Clouds, down the dugs! The faded sky, blue dry, thus has oppressed. Oh heaven come close, with manna wet hugs! With mercy prayer, to God, our sins confessed. At summer’s dawn, a nimbostratus calls. The sun is hot beneath the gorgeous falls. ~ ~ ~ The drought, a distant thought, as rain conceives. The humid clouds do water grass and ferns. A summer rain rebirths red wagon. Leaves, submerged in verdant waft. The earth’s soil turns to crimson mud, and raindrops drain off eaves. A prosperous psalm, the creek with child churns. The palpitations - thunder of my soul. Strong pulse of Summer rain - a fruitful bowl. 8/20/2017 Summer Rain Contest (Dale Cozart) 1st Place Ottava Rima Prayer - 1 syllable
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Cozart Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 3:25 PM
I'm back for a re-read. That's why I fave poems and your's is no exception. This was the first entry in the contest and I put it through to the winner's round immediately. I wasn't exactly sure it would win it all, but I found it very hard to imagine anything else coming close. Awesome write!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 4:00 PM
Wow, thanks Dale! I also appreciate the reread! I shall have to dig into my faves as well!
Hopper Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 7:29 AM
Beautiful! Congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 4:00 PM
Thank you, Anna!
Roberts Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 6:30 AM
An overflowing bowl of brilliance, congrats
Rodrigues Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 6:34 AM
Thanks, Donna!
Smith Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 8:03 PM
Terrific write Kim, congratulations...
Rodrigues Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 6:35 AM
Thanks, Charlie!
Allison Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 3:44 PM
Congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 4:41 PM
Thanks, Jan! <3
Gentile Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 6:33 AM
Congrats Kim!!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 4:41 PM
Thanks, Mike!
Pett Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 3:16 AM
Absolutely brilliant, congratulations on your well deserved win Kim. :))
Rodrigues Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 4:40 PM
Thank you, Ronnie!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 2:16 AM
Wow, this is awesome Kim! Great big congratulations on your deserving first placement! : )
Rodrigues Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 4:39 PM
Thank you, Connie!
Canerdy Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 9:20 PM
How lovely! Congrats on your top win, Kim! Janice
Rodrigues Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 9:56 PM
Thanks, Janice!
Roper Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 8:21 PM
Beautifully done, Kim, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve ~`*
Rodrigues Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 9:56 PM
Thanks, Eve!
Ashley Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 6:43 PM
Congratulations Kim on your top win! Spectacular! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 7:55 PM
Thanks, Susan! <3
Medders Tobechi Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 5:33 PM
Congratulations Kim on your first place trophy win. I love the imagery in your ottava rima. Well written.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 7:56 PM
Thanks, Janis! <3 Kim
Pandit Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 4:48 PM
Congrats Kim for your #1 ranking!
Cozart Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 4:35 PM
Congratulations on your 1st Place win! This was a VERY tough contest to judge. Thank you so much for taking the time to enter. Fave.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 7:57 PM
Thanks so much, Dale! Excited!
Croft Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 1:47 PM
beautiful poem. good luck in the contest
Rodrigues Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 2:07 PM
Thank you, Karen!
Warrior Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 8:33 AM
Well crafted my friend...rain rain go away...god bless...^WW^
Rodrigues Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 9:16 AM
Thanks WW! Blessings, my friend!
Soper Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 2:54 AM
Well done Kim... could do with a bit of rain here.. haven't seen a drop since March... good luck in the contest...
Rodrigues Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 6:49 AM
Thanks! I hope you get your rain. We had a drought for quite a while. It has been a lovely summer this year.
Pandit Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 8:55 PM
Well depicted ottava rima.. feel the rain's misery.. good luck, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 9:02 PM
Thanks, Vijay,
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