Summer Rain

I looked upon the stars , When I gazed at your face.
I seen mars & flying cars I hope this vision don't fade. 
I wonder why these butterflies want escape the base of my brain. 
Sometimes I think that your love ain't the same.
Your smile turn to a cry like how the sunshine became sudden rain. 
You bring my heart sudden pain why did you walk away . 
All the trust you've gain just to erase.
Please don't change summer rain. 
Please don't fade summer rain. 
I need summer rain to make flowers grow .
And when the hours go past I laugh at all the things we could've had. 
Or should've had. 
Rain pours on the glass after an hour pass 12. 
And all I can think about is how I needed your help. 
I wondered what you see in myself. 
Or did you heal my heart because I needed your help. 
Summer rain you are so far away.
And Every time I complain you go further in the wind. 
Some nights I pretend that we'll be one again.
Summer rain summer rain I hate that you faded away. 
My heart has faded To gray ... 
Without you My heart is Arizona & California in the summer days ...  
You're so far away I prayed for your summer rain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/3/2018 12:24:00 AM
Belated congrats on this whimsical take on the weather challenge contest. Well done.
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Date: 1/31/2018 7:58:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Keorie.
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Date: 1/31/2018 8:22:00 AM
beautiful but such sadness in your lines Keorie:-) Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/31/2018 12:50:00 AM
Congrats on your placement in my contest, Keorie, well done! Viv x
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