Hija De La Luna Poet Acrostic

Summer Rain

Scorching heat fires my body;
Under the sun I have nobody,
Missing a soul that I adore;
Make him come to my open door.
Everyone loves the summer sun
Resonates of kids having fun;
Riveting, exhilarating.
Alas, I am sorely missing
In this undulating terrain;
Not a drop of summer rain.

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Joseph May August 11, 2014 at 9:46 PM Congrats on a wonderful win Hija De La Luna August 12, 2014 at 7:26 AM Thanks, Joseph! :)

Robert Lindley August 11, 2014 at 8:04 PM Congrats on a great win!!!

Tim Smith August 11, 2014 at 4:40 PM Love the longing and the heat...congrats

Joyce Johnson August 11, 2014 at 2:38 PM Great lament for lack of rain. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Francine Roberts August 11, 2014 at 2:12 PM beautifully done, congrats on your second place win in my contest Hija De La Luna August 12, 2014 at 7:37 AM Grateful here for your appreciation of my piece, Francine! God bless you! :)

Jan Allison August 11, 2014 at 4:30 AM wonderfudescription on summer and rain congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xxx Hija De La Luna August 11, 2014 at 7:11 AM Thanks, Jan! God bless you! hugs back :))

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 11, 2014 at 4:12 AM Wow Luna great imagery n a wonderful poem, congrats on ur big win! Hija De La Luna August 11, 2014 at 7:12 AM Thanks, Dr, Upma! God bless you! :)

Dr.Ram Mehta August 11, 2014 at 2:04 AM Brilliant write on sunset rain, Luna. congrats on the win Hija De La Luna August 11, 2014 at 2:12 AM Thank you, Dr. Ram, for your kind words! God bless!