Summer Rain

summer thunderstorm follows the river northward soaking our garden May 28, 2021

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/29/2021 11:55:00 AM

Hello L Milton - The entry is is true haiku format voice and tone. Thank you for sharing your skill of this unique format. Here is a toast to the rain.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/29/2021 12:57:00 PM

Thank you, Lisa. Your thoughts are always appreciated.

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 5/29/2021 12:46:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku Milton... Summer rains are always pleasant and refreshing... God bless.. ~ Ani

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/29/2021 8:46:00 AM

Thank you so much for your comment, Anitha.

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/28/2021 7:21:00 PM

Great Haiku with wonderful imagery, fine wording, and perfect symbolism, Have a wonderful evening las soup mail.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/28/2021 7:29:00 PM

Thank you so much, Lasaad, for your comment.