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Summer Rain

All night our room was outer-walled with rain. Drops fell and flattened on the tin roof, The rain rattled and clashed, Some people say rain is just water. But to me, rain is like precious drops of water With your brightness; And the words you whispered to me Torches against the wall of cool, silver rain!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/21/2018 5:02:00 PM
Rain is so powerful in its form and meaning. you are inspired by it and it shows.
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Josh Heree
Date: 6/21/2018 5:11:00 PM
thanks, summer is always my favorite part of the year.

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