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Summer of 74

Rainbow ribbons in her hair Playing in the grass with no care Making mud pies in the dirt Skinny dipping in July no pants no shirt Playing hide and seek football too Finger painting pictures under sky blue Racing the wind playing in the rain Singing favorite songs pretending to have fame Riding in the back of an old pickup truck No seatbelt there on a dare so tough Catching fireflies and huge June bugs Sitting by camp fire drinking from a jug Walking to church for Sunday school Praying for sinners crazies and fools Not yet finessed in politically correct Calling it how you see it no regrets

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Date: 9/7/2024 9:22:00 PM
Wow! What a scene you have depicted here, Karen. Smashing images flood my brain with longing for a 'gentler day and age.' Super stuff!! Thanks, gw
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Karen Jones
Date: 9/7/2024 9:44:00 PM
We really are lucky to have lived and these memories to look back on huh? So happy to share with you!
Date: 9/4/2024 12:39:00 PM
Smashing days to reminisce over. I was newly into a group I’d follow for the next 50 years (and counting) and one year short of my first moped…. AND FREEDOM! Thoroughly enjoyed your reverie, Karen. Terry
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Karen Jones
Date: 9/4/2024 2:59:00 PM
I think it’s cool you kept tabs for 50 years! It’s fun to reminisce on good times isn’t it? Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading.
Date: 9/4/2024 1:07:00 AM
Fond memories of the 'good old days'
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Karen Jones
Date: 9/4/2024 1:50:00 AM
Yes! Thanks for reading Joseph!
Date: 9/3/2024 6:44:00 PM
That's great. I like the idea of straightforwardness. I enjoyed your poem very much.
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Karen Jones
Date: 9/3/2024 9:24:00 PM
Aw thank you Hilda!
Date: 9/3/2024 1:04:00 PM
Hmmm, those for me would be about a decade earlier. I am guessing you are in your 50's? Nice to read
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Karen Jones
Date: 9/3/2024 9:23:00 PM
I am lol. Thanks for reading.
Date: 9/2/2024 5:45:00 PM
Very nice poem!
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Karen Jones
Date: 9/2/2024 6:08:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 9/2/2024 11:55:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun/wonderful write. 74 when life was better for all. Kids could just be kids having fun. Have a wonderful day writing away..................
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Karen Jones
Date: 9/2/2024 1:05:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 9/2/2024 9:57:00 AM
Wonderful writing. enjoyed. God bless you with lots of love, Gina
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Karen Jones
Date: 9/2/2024 10:13:00 AM
Thanks Gina and God bless you too!
Date: 9/2/2024 8:59:00 AM
Good of you to pray for sinners. Plenty around. Loved your memories. Hugs.
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Karen Jones
Date: 9/2/2024 9:13:00 AM
Thanks Victor! Hugs
Date: 9/2/2024 5:54:00 AM
Love this! Made me smile!
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Karen Jones
Date: 9/2/2024 7:21:00 AM
Hugs aw so glad you like it Kim!
Date: 9/2/2024 12:34:00 AM
Happy times Karen, seems like a lifetime ago now. Tom
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Karen Jones
Date: 9/2/2024 12:58:00 AM
I agree Tom it was! Thanks for reading!

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