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Summer Nightmares

Green 
gross and nasty 
film covered slim.

Clear 
see all the 
way through
pools.


Cory long
septolet contest

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/21/2011 3:53:00 PM

Love your poem, Cory, and I see congratulations are in order. I have never written a septolet, but this one's great! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/20/2011 11:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Septolet" Cory. Love, Carol

Jack Horne

Date: 7/20/2011 9:41:00 AM

Many congratulations, Cory : )

Jodie Williams

Date: 7/20/2011 1:37:00 AM

Nice entry Cory, a well deserved placement

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/19/2011 8:54:00 PM

cory, loads of smiling cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs

Elaine George

Date: 7/19/2011 8:33:00 PM

Congrats on your winning Septolet, Cory. lainie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2011 7:44:00 PM

Hey, didn't I remark on this one? Didn't see my comment. Anyway, congratulations, Cory!

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 7/19/2011 4:35:00 PM

congratulations on your win :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/19/2011 3:56:00 PM

Congrats cory on a great top ten win my friend..this is super cool.. great theme pools especially this time of year luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/19/2011 3:18:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this creative Septolet contest..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/19/2011 2:54:00 PM

My congratulations on this win in my contest, cory

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2011 2:08:00 PM

Clear is definitely much better than green and nasty!! One nightmare I will never worry about, but i sure wish I could have a pool! good luck in the contest. I am reading some great septolets!

Roxanna Johnson

Date: 7/19/2011 8:44:00 AM

enjoyed(:

Lisa Cooper

Date: 7/19/2011 4:26:00 AM

another winner, great septolet entry

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/19/2011 3:41:00 AM

cory, i feel your sense of surrealism... greeeat work wiht winning huggs! :) nette

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/18/2011 4:44:00 AM

What a blessing we have in PoetrySoup. A place to come to write and read and make new friends along the ink trail. I am wishing you a day full of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope to read many more written by you in the future Cory. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/17/2011 6:05:00 PM

Thanks for the entry, Cory