Summer Night Symphonies

Locusts and crickets rub their legs like mad
   Their summer night symphonies uniformly bad

Yet when chill breezes still these musicians' strings
   I long for the return of their discordant wings
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Krutsinger Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 5:21 PM
I think they are wonderfully melodic; I love all of the night sounds!
Wolf Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 5:32 PM
--even the sound of the wolf at the door?! LOL. Thanks, Caren! :) gw
Green Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 1:06 PM
This was fun my friend. Those concerts of spring and summer are certainly worth waiting for.
Wolf Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 2:21 PM
Tickets go on sale when the last snows melt. Discounts available for certain poets for whom I can 'pull some strings!' :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 10:37 PM
Nice little rhyme! Enjoyed!
Wolf Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 2:19 PM
Thank you so much, Kim! :) gw
Leiser Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 10:09 PM
I always love those cricket sounds and miss them since we no longer live near a creek area. Great poem, Gershon! :)
Wolf Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 2:18 PM
No crickets in the trees near you? Seems odd... Thanks, Laura, and Season's best, Gershon
Adams Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 8:09 PM
...i long to hear their sounds again... come on spring, shove winter out the door, no one cares for the black and white somber days... hugs
Wolf Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 9:11 PM
I think you might well be happy to see Climate Change go berserk, as long as that meant skippng winter in PA! Smiles, Gershon
Y. Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 6:54 PM
Hi Gershon, I am with you my friend. I enjoyed the read. Have a great evening:-) Alexis
Y. Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 8:25 PM
Lol! If you really want to know, I'm down stairs. Cheers! ( I'll use your famous sentiments tonight).
Wolf Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 7:19 PM
You're with me?! That's great. Are you upstairs or downstairs? LOL. Thanks for your support, Alexis. Happy Happiness, Gershon
Theraven Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 6:28 PM
Gershon, I like this symphonic poem's feelings felt in chorus. Though locust' eyes, such an other-worldly look. I miss their song too. -Richard
Wolf Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 7:18 PM
Yes. The colder it gets, the more their song is missed… And so it goes every year. Thanks, Richard. Happy happy! ~ gw
Bauer Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 5:56 PM
i agree completely, gershon! well put!
Wolf Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 7:15 PM
Thank you so much for encouraging me, ilene! Warm wishes, Gershon
Na Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 5:40 PM
Thanks for sharing this. You tired of winter already?
Na Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 1:20 AM
its a balmy -12 here in Nebraska now. 17 inches of snow on the ground
Wolf Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 7:17 PM
Me? Tired of winter? In balmy Chicago? LOL. I may be tired, but not b/c of Old Man Winter… His best/worst is still ahead... Looking forward! :) gw
Buehler Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 5:30 PM
I feel the same way, Gershon. Your lovely poem evokes summertime sensations. :)
Wolf Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 7:14 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely comment -- 'evokes summertime sensations.' Appreciate your support greatly, Evelyn. Warm wishes, Gershon '
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