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Inspired by the Painting: 'Summer night (Linger on shore)' by Edvard Munch

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The rocks were warm, hard, embers of the summer day sun. The air was calm, balmy, thick and syrupy. The sea a mirror, shimmering with gentle sky sparkles and glints. The girl entered the scene so serenely. She removed her hat devotedly, to take it all in, lithely lingering on the shore. She became a willing partner, a participant in the textural contrasts of the scene with gentle white dress caressing over the rocks so gently. Her demeanor and blank face expressed the peacefulness, tranquility and solitude of the scene, so welcoming and engrossing.

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Date: 7/14/2023 6:42:00 PM
"She became a willing partner, a participant in the textural contrasts of the scene" - You have illustrated the scene very beautifully. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/14/2023 6:56:00 PM
Thanks very much for your comments. I Try!
Date: 7/14/2023 3:19:00 PM
John, your delightful word choice nicely expresses “ the peacefulness, tranquility and solitude of the scene...” Congratulations on your placement in Dilly Dally’s contest.
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John Anderson
Date: 7/14/2023 3:21:00 PM
Thanks very much for your kind comments. Cheers and Best Wishes
Date: 6/13/2023 3:08:00 PM
And so lovely, John!!
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John Anderson
Date: 6/13/2023 3:23:00 PM
thanks very much. Cheers

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