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Summer Night 

     remnants of the day
hide away among the reeds…
      fireflies at twilight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Cona Adams
Date: 7/24/2015 8:39:00 AM
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An easy seven for me, David.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 7/1/2015 8:19:00 PM
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traditional haiku has a cut to the 3rd line [you have a nice leap!] & it is in the required 2 parts with a season word [you have achieved both!] yet traditional haiku is also objective & though this is a lovely 3 line verse, the first 2 lines are subjective, you have personified the day by having it hide. It took me 60 years to learn the difference between subjective & objective but it really helped my writing to know! Light & Love
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 7/1/2015 8:43:00 AM
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a topnotcher, indeed.. congrats, david.. huggs
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Date: 7/1/2015 4:18:00 AM
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Awesome Haiku David! Congrats on top place win!
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Date: 7/1/2015 12:52:00 AM
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Hi David, congratulations on your Traditional Haiku win. Love LINDA
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/1/2015 12:33:00 AM
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Terrific, and a worthy winner, David. Well done. Regards, Viv
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Date: 7/1/2015 12:07:00 AM
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David, nice win. SK
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/30/2015 8:37:00 PM
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Swinging back with congratulations on your top-of-the-class win! Bravo! Pandita
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/30/2015 7:52:00 PM
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An excellent haiku, David! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim
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John Lawless
Date: 6/30/2015 6:53:00 PM
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Well done David- great visual and wonderful play on words.
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James Tate
Date: 6/30/2015 6:01:00 PM
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Good job, David.
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/30/2015 4:43:00 PM
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David, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Paul Callus
Date: 6/30/2015 4:01:00 PM
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Well done, David! A summer day ends serenely with captivating imagery! Congratulations on your top spot win! // paul
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Carrie Richards
Date: 6/30/2015 2:51:00 PM
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Love this, and it gives me such a peaceful picture in my mind's eye ! Congratulations, David !!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/30/2015 1:28:00 PM
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a fantastic and well deserved win. Congratulations.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/30/2015 1:00:00 PM
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congrats David on your first place with this perfect traditional haiku hugs
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Cona Adams
Date: 6/30/2015 8:15:00 AM
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Love it, David. Excellent
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Cona Adams
Date: 6/30/2015 8:14:00 AM
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Love it, David.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/28/2015 6:33:00 PM
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Beautiful, rich with imagery haiku! Love it and rate it a 7!! Pandita
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