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Summer Needs Winter

Draped in rain and cold once again His soul’s memory soaks delight Embraces nights of stark darkness Haunted tears dried up by the sun This time around he is prepared Mind sheltered by a parasol Snow covers the window of change 08th September 2019 Farewell Summer contest Sponsored by Nette Onclaud 7 lines with 8 syllables each Checked with howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 9/12/2019 5:18:00 PM
Love that line bout the mind sheltered by parasol. You have an interesting way with imagery. Congrats in the contest
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Date: 9/12/2019 1:08:00 PM
i never gave an HM since i started doing challenges...this was supposed to place, kai, but for some reason, there was a system error when i got to the last part of judging... congrats and thanks for joining.. i hope TPS can help me with this... huggs
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Date: 9/12/2019 12:39:00 PM
- Goodbye Summer .... and congratulations on your winning poem, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/12/2019 5:43:00 AM
Congrats on your placement in the contest!;)
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Date: 9/8/2019 7:37:00 AM
Nice use of metaphors, you did this very well.. great entry for the contest..
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