Kai Michael Neumann Poet Free verse

Summer Needs Winter

Draped in rain and cold once again

His soul’s memory soaks delight

Embraces nights of stark darkness

Haunted tears dried up by the sun

This time around he is prepared

Mind sheltered by a parasol

Snow covers the window of change



08th September 2019

Farewell Summer contest

Sponsored by Nette Onclaud

7 lines with 8 syllables each

Checked with howmanysyllables.com

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Andrea Dietrich September 12, 2019 at 5:18 PM Love that line bout the mind sheltered by parasol. You have an interesting way with imagery. Congrats in the contest

Nette Onclaud September 12, 2019 at 1:08 PM i never gave an HM since i started doing challenges...this was supposed to place, kai, but for some reason, there was a system error when i got to the last part of judging... congrats and thanks for joining.. i hope TPS can help me with this... huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen September 12, 2019 at 12:39 PM - Goodbye Summer .... and congratulations on your winning poem, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Chiri September 12, 2019 at 5:43 AM Congrats on your placement in the contest!;)

Silent One September 8, 2019 at 7:37 AM Nice use of metaphors, you did this very well.. great entry for the contest..