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Summer Moon

Slowly rising towards Unseen wisps of clouds Murky shadows projected Muffled light reflected Endlessly cycles by Roving Summer's sky Mornings hide Selene's face Ongoing celestial race Only by Apollo outshone Never travels alone

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Robert Lindley

Date: 8/11/2014 8:14:00 PM

Has a mystical quality to it. Big congrats on your win my friend!!!

Tim Smith

Date: 8/11/2014 7:22:00 PM

Great flow Mark...congrats Tim

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/11/2014 2:19:00 PM

lovey piece , congrats on your win in my contest

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/11/2014 6:01:00 AM

Love this write on the summer moon, congrats on the win.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/11/2014 4:53:00 AM

Wonderful write Mark n so is ur win, big congrats!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/11/2014 4:42:00 AM

dropping back with my congrats Mark:-) hugs jan xxx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2014 11:10:00 PM

this is wonderful, Mark. I see you chose the same theme as I did. I think those of us who chose summer moon are the "romantics!!"(did I get that wrong?)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/18/2014 5:00:00 PM

Wonderful acrostic good luck in the contest Mark, Hugs Jan xxx

Mark J. Halliday
Date: 6/19/2014 9:07:00 PM

Thanks. Almost forgot it was an acrostic and started to switch a few lines around.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/18/2014 2:06:00 PM

Very nice Mark..very celestial...BG

Mark J. Halliday
Date: 6/19/2014 9:06:00 PM

Thanks. Almost forgot it was an acrostic and started to switch a few lines around.