Nette Onclaud Poet Acrostic

Summer Moon

Slowly pulsing through glittered haze
Under cloudscape, her locks blow wild
Misty the blushed roses, ablaze
Moon of summer, warmth of hayrides
Enchanting peach fragrance of the night
Reveal your glory, dear chromed fay,

My eyes chase a Selene’s delight
Over hills wrapped in flamed crochet.
Oh, sleep denies a lullaby
No matter how you beam, goodbye!



Francine Roberts' Summer Acrostic Contest
by nette onclaud

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Robert Lindley August 11, 2014 at 8:08 PM Congrats on a fine write and great win!!!!

Tim Smith August 11, 2014 at 7:17 PM Stopping back with congrats on this magical piece...hugs Tim

Joyce Johnson August 11, 2014 at 2:42 PM A great write Nette. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Francine Roberts August 11, 2014 at 2:16 PM congrats nette, your work always gives me just what I'm looking for in my contests

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 11, 2014 at 4:50 AM thats lovely nette! ur summer moon shines out thru haze, congrats on big win!

Jan Allison August 11, 2014 at 4:37 AM simply sublime acrostic Nette one day I hope to be able to write like this you inspire me:-) Many congrats. Hugs jan xxxx

Dr.Ram Mehta August 11, 2014 at 2:08 AM Lovely flow of the words on summer moon, nette. congrats

Jslambert Mister Roboto June 26, 2014 at 6:49 PM flamed crochet,,,DIggIt! This reminds me of the moon of Friday the 13th this month!

Bl Devnath June 21, 2014 at 6:06 PM Nice stylish acrostic wonderfully penned. Read like a winner. Good luck. Loved always, my lovely friend, bl

Kelly Deschler June 19, 2014 at 3:25 PM A very nice acrostic, Nette! Your words flow so effortlessly here, which is sometimes hard to do with this form. I really enjoyed reading this beautiful and enchanting poem! Good luck in the contest!

Scott Thirtyseven June 18, 2014 at 8:05 AM I can see your beautiful moon lit night. Thanks you for this peaceful end to a hectic evening.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 18, 2014 at 4:36 AM - Really beautiful, Nette ! - Good luck in the contest - Have a great Wednesday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo June 17, 2014 at 5:49 PM Excellent; is all I can say. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

Liam Mcdaid June 17, 2014 at 5:46 PM very beautifully painted piece loved the image painted here

Sara Kendrick June 17, 2014 at 5:04 PM Ahh!! Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest.."Over hills wrapped in flamed crochet". I really like that line..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Tim Smith June 17, 2014 at 4:24 PM How beautifully you describe the scene nette...hugs Tim

Aiyah Torres June 17, 2014 at 3:07 PM awesomely crafted masterpiece... I love the fragrance of summer eve... so gentle and soothing..Thank you for the visit on my page, nette.. I'm fine.. thanks for remembering me!.. :O)) I hoep all is well for you..^_^

Andrea Dietrich June 17, 2014 at 2:41 PM ahhh, you were on my same wave length going with summer moon!! Very lovely, Nette.

Poet Tacito June 17, 2014 at 1:57 PM Sigh...yay for peaches & cloudscapes. Breathtaking.

Rora Onna June 17, 2014 at 12:59 PM I found myself swept away by the mystique of this poem! Sometimes, the moon can't make me sleep either, especially when she's up there like a majestic queen waiting for me to celebrate her fullness. A fave, a fave, Nette!

Justin Bordner June 17, 2014 at 12:59 PM Lovely spirit and flow Nette. " Over hills wrapped in flamed crochet..." that's pure beauty. Enjoy the chase! J.A.B.

Manny Paras June 17, 2014 at 12:51 PM This is out -of- this- world breathtaking and I am in this glorious night in your finely penned poem. I moon-gaze with you, master!