Summer Moon



                                            Grimy sweaty dusk, 
                                             L.A. hazy horizon.
                                            Steaming torrid lune.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Sambourne Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 8:49 PM
This is the night sky in LA for certainty. That smog haze blurs the moon like drunkenness. Another fine write. I hope that you are well. Sincere good wishes, Brian
Wells Avatar
April 25, 2023 at 8:18 PM
Thanks for the praise, Brian. Fortunately, I live in the Bay Area and not anywhere near LA. I hope you are well. Take care!
Turner Avatar
April 20, 2023 at 1:39 PM
Perfect description, Thomas. I've been there.
Wells Avatar
April 20, 2023 at 1:53 PM
I appreciate your comments. Thank you, Daniel!
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