Summer Moment

Pastoral green fields
watered by passing storm clouds
ah, blue sky returns



inspired by contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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K. Avatar
August 8, 2009 at 12:47 AM
This is such an image laden haiku--I particularly liked how it ends :) & thank you as well for your wonderful comments on my works :) --nikko
Freeman Avatar
July 18, 2009 at 6:07 PM
vivid,,,,,,,vivid,,,,,,,,,vivid,,,,God bless Moses
Brown Avatar
July 9, 2009 at 11:26 AM
I can see that in the picture also. Good luck in the contest Krista. Love, Carol
Strand Avatar
July 6, 2009 at 7:29 AM
Excellent Krista best wishes with the haiku.Thank you for your welcome comment today Rgds Brian
Fraser Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 4:16 PM
Beautiful pictures appearing, now the blue skies have returned>>James
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July 2, 2009 at 3:06 PM
What an uplifting view. Nice use of imagery. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for the kind words on mine. Keep on writing! Karen
Mckenzie Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 9:38 AM
Krista What a lovely Haiku good luck in the contest! Love Laura :)
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