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Summer Mentality

Fall in snow causing Warm breeze on a summer night. Hallucination!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/21/2010 5:16:00 PM
That snow better be a hallucination and not summer reality. Ha! Ha! We have enough of that white stuff in the winter here in North Dakota. Enjoyed the bit of humor. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Have a good weekend. Karen
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Date: 3/3/2010 8:11:00 AM
Congrats on your recent contest success Mary.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/2/2010 7:26:00 PM
Amen Marty.. a wonderful Senryu.. luv luv luv your title too... thankxxx for your special blog comments about my son leaving last night.. am trying to recover him not being here... your poem has uplifted my spirits.. appreciate your wonderful comments on all my poetry reads too..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/1/2010 11:41:00 PM
Brilliant as usual Marty!
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Date: 3/1/2010 11:29:00 PM
Good senryu...So cold so warm..:)love it..Charma
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Date: 3/1/2010 8:10:00 PM
What a welcome "hallucination" on a cold night, Marty. Enjoyed your senryu! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/1/2010 8:00:00 PM
lost the senses? hot and cold sure take mold to our bodies minds and makes us BRRR either way!
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