Summer Mentality

Fall in snow causing
Warm breeze on a summer night.
Hallucination!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 21, 2010 at 5:16 PM
That snow better be a hallucination and not summer reality. Ha! Ha! We have enough of that white stuff in the winter here in North Dakota. Enjoyed the bit of humor. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Have a good weekend. Karen
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March 3, 2010 at 8:11 AM
Congrats on your recent contest success Mary.Rgds Brian
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March 2, 2010 at 7:26 PM
Amen Marty.. a wonderful Senryu.. luv luv luv your title too... thankxxx for your special blog comments about my son leaving last night.. am trying to recover him not being here... your poem has uplifted my spirits.. appreciate your wonderful comments on all my poetry reads too..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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March 1, 2010 at 11:41 PM
Brilliant as usual Marty!
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March 1, 2010 at 11:29 PM
Good senryu...So cold so warm..:)love it..Charma
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March 1, 2010 at 8:10 PM
What a welcome "hallucination" on a cold night, Marty. Enjoyed your senryu! Love, Carolyn
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March 1, 2010 at 8:00 PM
lost the senses? hot and cold sure take mold to our bodies minds and makes us BRRR either way!
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