Summer Lovin'

where the breeze excites
and buttercups bear witness
the sun beats loudest
when blue eyes reflect the sky
not a cloud to spoil the view

© Harry J Horsman  2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gasun Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 10:22 AM
Absolutely wonderful my dear friend Harry! It's always my pleasure to read your poem. Thank you so much for sharing and congratulations on your win! I'm sorry for coming only today. My belated Thanks also for your visit on my poem. God bless! love and hugs, Galeo
Devnath  Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 1:56 PM
Excellent beauty of buttercups under summer's bright light. Congrats my lovely friend. Sorry for late. Loved always, bl
Neels Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 11:45 AM
Awesome Harry! Congratulations on your win as well. You making me long for Summer ;)
Maverick Avatar
May 29, 2016 at 12:37 PM
Here's wishing you the best for the contest with this most evocative piece Harry..'
Allison Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 9:59 AM
such a pretty tanka congrats on your win Harry:-) hugs Jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 9:22 PM
Lovely Harry. Congratulations on your win! ; )
Dietrich Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 9:08 PM
a romantic beauty, Harry. Good to see you did one for my contest and congrats to you.
Callus Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 2:56 PM
Beautiful summer days tinged with a romantic vein, Harry. Very lovely and well expressed. Congratulations on this fine win. ~ Regards // paul
Ficklin Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 10:14 AM
Congrats Harry... Sounds like you live near the desert with not a cloud in the sky :)
Andresen Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 5:53 AM
- Beautiful tanka, Harry - Luck in contest - hugs and a 7 // Anne-Lise :)
Teagan Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 12:40 AM
wow this is so pretty!
Ball Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 4:43 PM
Beautiful. To me this speaks of a beautiful summer day spent with your loved ones in the open air.. Love it. Thanks for sharing this lovely piece. Seven and good luck on the contest. JB
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 10:37 AM
another goodie you are on a roll xx
Kendrick Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 9:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work..Reads like a winner to me..Summer has its nice things to enjoy..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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