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Your words, like sun rays, warm my skin, Each syllable a sultry touch, as I soak you in. Like the summer sun, I feel your glowing presence, Seducing my senses with your radiant essence. Your scintillating smile, a tapestry divine, Where seduction meets desire, both yours and mine. Thirsting and feeding, our love divine. A sweltering fusion of rhythm and rhyme. The taste of your skin lingers on my lips, I trace beads of sweat along your sun-kissed hips. The scent of coconut lingers in the air, The sun highlights the curls in your long, flowing hair. Each breathless word, ignites a fierce flame, My longing and your passion, one and the same. In this summer lover’s fantasy, our hearts entwine, Burning with a fervent fever, a summer sublime.

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Date: 9/23/2024 2:51:00 PM
Bravo my friend an excellent piece of work .
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Date: 9/12/2024 6:22:00 AM
Great poem very romantic I love it
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Date: 7/12/2024 6:07:00 AM
Nothing in this world like a beautiful woman. Hot stuff Edward
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Edward Wraith
Date: 7/12/2024 6:17:00 AM
My sentiments exactly Tom!! I appreciate you stopping by and taking in my musing!! Have a wonderful day
Date: 7/12/2024 12:22:00 AM
The scent of coconut lingers in the air, what a line that is so very island ish and summer ish too. Sometimes love does that to us, make us long and feel so deeply, i enjoyed reading your rhymes flowing with brilliant alliterations and diction! Sunkissed hips to breathless words that ignite fierce flames! Passionate poem! Well delivered like always! Your longing youv depicted eloquently. Pleasure always reading your poems. Sending you light
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Edward Wraith
Date: 7/12/2024 6:16:00 AM
I am unworthy of such praises Empress. I do appreciate your kindness and support however, it means more to me than you’ll ever know!! You are an inspiration and a tremendous talent my dear!! Thank you for blessing me

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