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Summer Lover

The tongue of summer’s sun nearly sears my skin as I unlace strings on my bikini. Sultry rays I lie back to embrace! Oct. 12, 2019 Written for L Milton Hankins' Your Best Rhyming Couplet #3 Poetry Contest Revised to 4 lines for Line Gauthier's Bite Size Poem No24 Poetry Contest

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Date: 10/18/2021 1:04:00 PM
Your sultry write is an alliterative masterpiece Andrea.
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Date: 10/12/2021 5:24:00 PM
Brings back meniries, Andrea Pangie
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Date: 10/12/2021 5:11:00 PM
You and your love affair with summer... this is sultry in more ways than one. Great write, my friend
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Date: 10/12/2021 1:50:00 PM
Hope you had some sun blocker. Sunburn can be painful.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/12/2021 2:27:00 PM
yep, first tryst of the summer, one needs "protection" heehee
Date: 10/12/2021 1:11:00 PM
ooh err love it Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/12/2021 1:10:00 PM
Fantastic! Such intensity in just 2 lines.
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