Andrea Dietrich Poet Quatrain

Summer Lover

The tongue of summer’s sun

nearly sears my skin as I unlace

strings on my bikini. 
                              
Sultry rays I lie back to embrace!


Oct. 12, 2019
Written for L Milton Hankins' Your Best Rhyming Couplet #3 Poetry Contest
Revised to 4 lines
for Line Gauthier's Bite Size Poem No24 Poetry Contest

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Caren Krutsinger October 18, 2021 at 1:04 PM Your sultry write is an alliterative masterpiece Andrea.

Panagiota Romios October 12, 2021 at 5:24 PM Brings back meniries, Andrea Pangie

John Watt October 12, 2021 at 5:11 PM You and your love affair with summer... this is sultry in more ways than one. Great write, my friend

Victor Buhagiar October 12, 2021 at 1:50 PM Hope you had some sun blocker. Sunburn can be painful. Andrea Dietrich October 12, 2021 at 2:27 PM yep, first tryst of the summer, one needs "protection" heehee

Jan Allison October 12, 2021 at 1:11 PM ooh err love it Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Tacito October 12, 2021 at 1:10 PM Fantastic! Such intensity in just 2 lines.