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Summer Love sijo

I kiss my summer love goodbye - as winter’s surely here:
The autumn brought our  falling out and cooled the lusty heat
And now we stand as chilly as the ice that freezes both our hearts.

For Debbie’s Sijo contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/4/2014 6:34:00 AM
I love the connection you made with autumn and falling out...Beautiful play on words. Many congrats on your win with the lovely sijo, Jack. bfn Lainie
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Date: 7/4/2014 6:33:00 AM
I love the connection you made with autumn and falling out...Beautiful play on words. Many congrats on your win with the lovely sijo, Jack. bfn Lainie
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Date: 7/3/2014 10:11:00 PM
You did a lot better than me in this one, Jack. Congrats to you, my friend. A well deserved win.
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Date: 7/3/2014 11:33:00 AM
Wonderful win Jack...Linda
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Date: 7/3/2014 10:47:00 AM
Wonderful sijo Jack ! Loved the hearts freeze,,, congrats on huge win !
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Date: 7/3/2014 5:57:00 AM
Lovely write on the summer love, Jack, congrats on the win
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Date: 7/3/2014 2:38:00 AM
The chills undeniably on their way and present. GOOD GOOD write, CONGRATS on the write and win.
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Date: 7/2/2014 6:17:00 PM
weeeee. your first line is so catchy.. :D KUDOS!!!
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Date: 7/2/2014 6:03:00 PM
grats on your win Jack :)
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Date: 7/2/2014 3:45:00 PM
Hi Jack, congratulations on well-deserved great win! This is just a lovely write! Kindest regards.
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Date: 7/2/2014 1:53:00 PM
Congrats on a great win, Jack, my friend! Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 6/27/2014 7:54:00 AM
How do we survive the winter And summer seems so short. In cold the love does splinter. In warmth, we woo and court.
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Date: 6/20/2014 6:43:00 AM
BRRR. Well done with this tricky little form. Not as easy as this write makes it look.
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Date: 6/18/2014 5:26:00 PM
Interesting Sijo on summer love Jack, I can guess a lot of people would recognise these realities you express through this form of verse..'
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Date: 6/15/2014 10:45:00 PM
From summer heat of passion to winters frigid cold.... well told!!
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