Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Sijo

Summer Love

Love to heart is what summer signifies to the farmer’s year
It brings to harvest all the lovely flowers of very soul
Now the heart is so content that a few drops can overfill it

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June 10, 2014
Form : Sijo (3-4-4-4. 3-4-4-4, 3-5-4-3)
(Syllables 45)
Dr. Ram Mehta
Contest:Sijo Strings by Debbie Guzzi

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Richard Lamoureux July 7, 2014 at 7:35 PM Lovely piece, congratulations!

Len Gasun July 4, 2014 at 1:15 PM This is extremely beautiful. So enjoyed. Thank u so much for sharing my dear friend Dr. Ram. Many congratulations on your great win! love lots, Leonora

Elaine George July 4, 2014 at 6:14 AM Magniicant! Dr. Ram. What a beautiful Sijo. Many congrats on your win. bfn Lainie

Carrie Richards July 3, 2014 at 10:30 PM Oh wow, the last line is so beautiful !! Well done, Dr. Ram !!!

Andrea Dietrich July 3, 2014 at 9:51 PM VERY nicely done. Very nicely won!!! Congrats.

Poet Destroyer A July 3, 2014 at 11:35 AM Nice win...PD

Mohan Chutani July 2, 2014 at 11:59 PM Dr. Ram, very elegant Sijo on summer love- it brings to harvest all the lovely flowers of very soul- and brimmed it is contended- gives a very satisfying feel. Congrats on top win. Mohan

Casarah Nance July 2, 2014 at 5:34 PM Grats on your win :) :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 2, 2014 at 5:11 PM The third line is a wow !!! Kudos Dir..:)

Theresa Stephens July 2, 2014 at 5:08 PM Hi, Congrats on your fine win.' Heart brimming over with love' makes happy thoughts to dwell on. All the best, Theresa xx

Pandita Sietesantos July 2, 2014 at 3:37 PM Hi Dr. Ram, congratulations yet another welll-deserved great win! This is such a beautiful. Kindest regards.

Debbie Guzzi July 2, 2014 at 3:02 PM Hi Ram, what a charming entry, great that you brought in nature & man [maybe 2nd line should be /every soul?] that line 3 is just perfect. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Dr.Ram Mehta July 3, 2014 at 5:47 AM Thanks, deb, for the appreciation. Light and love

John Lawless July 2, 2014 at 2:31 PM Love that last line...sums up the joys of summer and of summer love.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 2, 2014 at 2:12 PM Wonderful write Dr Ram ! Some great similes here wid love ,, congrats on huge win!

Arlene Smith July 2, 2014 at 1:34 PM Congrats on a great win, Dr. Mehta my friend! I love this take on summer love.. Hugs. Arlene

Paul Callus July 2, 2014 at 1:13 PM Ripe time to reap what we sow in love. Congrats Dr on a deserved win. // paul

Verlena S. Walker June 13, 2014 at 9:55 PM Beautiful Sijo Ram... Enjoying my visit. Verlena

Arlene Smith June 12, 2014 at 6:09 AM Dr. Mehta, This is an amazing write!.. All in compassing nature and humanity. I adore this one. Good luck in the contest my friend.. Arlene..

V P Mahur June 11, 2014 at 4:41 AM Dear Sir, Love is so powerful that even a few drops give a great pleasure and deep content. Thanks for your comments on my poem. VP

Carrie Richards June 10, 2014 at 8:01 PM Oh, wow.......so beautiful. It seems as if this is a classic example of poetry. Lovely piece!

Mark Peterson June 10, 2014 at 2:29 PM Lovely write, Dr. Ram—a poem whose effect lingers well past the duration of its reading. Thanks for commenting on my poem "A Day in Life," written for catharsis and hen deleted.

Kevin Rocheleau June 10, 2014 at 1:16 PM Nice work, short and sweet.

Andrea Dietrich June 10, 2014 at 7:43 AM That last line is quite stunning, and a great way to compare the two things.

Joseph May June 10, 2014 at 6:48 AM Very good sijo Dr Ram...