Summer Love

summer began 
and we were just friends
now im missing you when youre not around
too far gone and out of town
out of sight
but always on my mind
thinking about you gives me chills
the way you leave me feeling almost kills
out of breath, 
hand shaking
someone took the air
missing you more as the days slowly pass
wondering and wishing that this summer love will last
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
July 1, 2012 at 5:21 PM
Very expressive and emotve work..Sara
Rozario Avatar
June 25, 2012 at 9:59 PM
Nice sweet poem...hope your summer love will see many more seasons in future...enjoyed!!!
Chakrapany Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 11:55 PM
simple but heart touching .a well crafted love poem .avoiding cliche words you can give a new look to this lovely poem .thank you for sharing .jk
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