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Summer Love

I remember the way you first looked at me Your eyes sparkled in the sunlight When you talked to me my heart jumped with glee Everything at that moment seemed right We spent everyday together Hoping we could become more than friends Wanting to stay together forever Wishing things wouldn’t come to an end We spent the whole night talking For tomorrow you would leave Holding hands and walking I’m starting to deceive As I watch you go A tear fills my eye My heart filled with woe As I’m left to cry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/31/2010 7:07:00 PM
First of all welcome to poetry soup and good job on writing this poem its a really sad but nice poem
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Date: 5/24/2010 8:23:00 AM
I like the tone and the expressiveness of this poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 5/23/2010 2:10:00 PM
Powerful tug on emotions about summer love. Welcome to Poetry soup! Love, Susan
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Date: 5/23/2010 3:21:00 AM
A very passionate poem
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Date: 5/22/2010 7:22:00 PM
Lovely poem Alicia with the nice name. A Haiku is traditionally 5/7/5 syllables. But this such a koolio piece >> James
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