Notes About The Poem
Well, I never wrote a sonnet before. after realizing that I did it wrong and spent hours doing it (lol) I decided to keep it as my own version of a sonnet. A sonnet as I understand has 14 lines with 10 syllables with rhymes. Mine here has 14 lines with 14 syllables and rhymes...Oh well...hope you like it.
Summer Love
Summer love, a man, a woman, conception, a new born
Ring the bells, amplify megaphones, bugle the cow horn
The ceremony begins, baptism, cries, holy water
From two one, family, father, mother, son or daughter
A priests blessings, proud grandparents, proud parents, birth anew
Hospital papers, a birth certificate, much to do
Tears from parents, tears from baby, tears from all, tears of joy
Breast fed, nipples, milking mothers, changing diapers, oh boy
A songbird sings, rock-a-bye-baby, lullaby's at large
Aunts, uncles, nieces, nephews, sitters take charge
A pacifier, a cradle, corners of stuffed toys
Hanging crib toys, singing toys, jingling bells, rattling noise
A new generation, of life, all this, in summer love
A woman, man, baby, a family, from god above
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