Summer Limerick

Look at the blazing sun.
The children seem to be having a lot of fun.
Inside my heart you look like a phantom.
Outside this world you look like Jasmine.
I can't deny I saw your face in the crowd as I saw all the children run.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 5, 2010 at 9:35 PM
It's a nice poem on yearning with apt images
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