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Summer Laziness

The dolphins in the sea of Malibu Love playing game of peek-a-boo In summer, on the beach As lazy as sucking leach Watching fun, we lie on sand as bamboo 2.6.2020

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Beata Agustin

Date: 6/12/2020 2:18:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this: a great example of what your contest requires. God bless you.

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/14/2020 1:36:00 AM

Welcome Beata.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2020 4:53:00 PM

thanks, Mohan.

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/6/2020 8:42:00 PM

Welcome Andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/4/2020 10:46:00 PM

This is really cool, Mohan. For some reason I was thinking you had done the haiku contest but I think I was wrong about that now. I was gonna use dolphin as my spirit animal but went with cat. It's great you did a limerick on dolphins. Question for you. Can we do more than one limerick for our lazy summer poem?

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/5/2020 4:52:00 PM

got it!!

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/4/2020 10:49:00 PM

Upto you Andrea. For me one is enough. More than one, theme should remain same and connection of stanzas not broken. Only new poems.