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 End Of Summer, Beginning Of Fall Tanka Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Written 8/17/2026

summer laughter

polished by sunlight
dark green leaves of the live oak
shades spider web swing
happy children's laughter with
itsy bitsy spider song
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Kitchin Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 4:25 PM
Eve, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet tanka poem. 🥉
Dietrich Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 3:21 PM
Back with my congrats, Eve. Hope the new season treats you well
Goldsmith Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 12:17 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun "summer laughter" write again. Have a blessed day with your win.............
Goldsmith Avatar
August 20, 2026 at 12:21 PM
I enjoyed reading your "summer laughter." What a great/fun picture. Love Both... "Good Luck"  I did, "Summer To Fall." Have a lovely day writing away............
Edmonds  Avatar
August 17, 2026 at 7:42 PM
A lovely poem and a delightful picture Eve… Beryl
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 17, 2026 at 4:16 PM
awww! enjoyed it!
Roper Avatar
August 17, 2026 at 6:29 PM
Thank you so much, Sara! This is the view from my window: a live oak tree stands in front of my yard, with a web swing I hung years ago for my grandson. Two young girls—one his age and the other two years older—often come over to play on the swing. My grandson is autistic and usually does not interact with other children, but this year he has come out of his shell to play with them. It is so heartwarming to see him happy, enjoying time with the girls.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 17, 2026 at 2:24 PM
Hello Eve Roper, Children enjoy the summer. They do not lime to return to school. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 10:28 AM
Hello Eve Roper, well you know he enjoyed the day care. Hugs. /Darlene/
Roper Avatar
August 17, 2026 at 6:31 PM
Darlene, you are absolutely right. My grandson was pleading to stay at daycare rather than return to school.
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