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Summer In The Sun

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On the shore sun tanner's bathing 
Boating people, passing; waving 
Seashell looking- children explore
Sun tanner's bathing on the shore

Summertime house rental booking
Children explore- seashell looking 
Sipping sea breezes with my spouse
Rental booking summertime house

Kids licking flavored ice freezes
With my spouse sipping sea breezes 
Having fun when the sun is ticking
flavored ice freezes- kids licking 

Spending my summer in the sun
When the clock is ticking, having fun 
No way can this be a bummer 
In the sun spending my summer 

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Date: 7/7/2025 1:46:00 PM
Just a perfect summer poem for a perfect summer getaway, CM. Great stuff, gw
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Date: 7/7/2025 1:15:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your "Summer In The Sun" write. Sounds like a great time. Great Ending... "Good Luck" Have a fun day writing away.............
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