Bryn Strudwick Poet Limerick

Summer In the Sun

SUMMER IN THE SUN

There was a young man from Verdun
Who lazed in the hot summer sun.
He reclined, all revealing,
Till his skin started peeling,
Then he said, “I reckon I’m done”

11th June 2020
Summer Laziness Contest
Sponsor - Mohan Chutani

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Aditi Mishra June 22, 2020 at 1:19 AM I've experienced this and I avoid doing it for this reason. Congratulations on your win Bryn

Mohan Chutani June 18, 2020 at 8:54 PM Bryn, congratulations for your placement in my contest. Best. Mohan.