Summer Impatience

SUMMER    IMPATIENCE


Now  it is glorious summer 
And the winter of our discontent is turned
Into a sudden sea of dandelions without number.


This morning I walked out across the park 
Which I cross every day.
Yesterday it was merely  green  and stark,  


Patiently awaiting its bi-weekly trim by noisy machine:
The high-point in its half-monthly existence
As a small part of the city’s spaces green.


But today it was a riot of impatient  weeds,
Yelling with tiny voices yellow and  bright,
Rapidly bursting  from their dormant seeds, 


As if God woke up this morning from His oblivion  
And,  as an afterthought,  commanded,    
“ Let there be  dandelions.”
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NOTE

The first two lines of the poem are closely modeled on 
Shakespeare’s famous lines in the play  RICHARD  III   

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Written by Sydney Peck
Entered in Debbie Guzzi's Contest    	Summer
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Williams Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 1:21 PM
Sidney, belated congrats on your win..David
Brown Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 12:54 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the Summer contest Sidney. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
June 26, 2012 at 7:07 PM
This is the most inventive of them all. Focusing on the sudden growth of all those dandelions. I really enjoyed this one, Sydney. Congrats on your wim.
Richards Avatar
June 26, 2012 at 6:37 PM
Let there be dandelions.........a bouquet for a dandy summer poem....what would summer be without blowing dandelions into the wind?? Loved it!
A   Avatar
June 26, 2012 at 6:28 PM
SIdney,,, congrats in DG, contest... I am so happy to see you on her wonderful list.. Always~PD
Guzzi Avatar
June 17, 2012 at 6:02 PM
ah a good beginning...now write ;) [beginning climax..end] ..[tickle] What is a weed and why..a rose by any other name would smell as sweet? Light & Love
Mist Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 12:24 PM
oh dandelions are wonderful, you can make jelly or soup from them...:) we all look forward to summer..it reminds me of a burning sun and heat, waters to cool, picnics with loved one in the grass...bare feet in grass or sand..
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