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Summer Idleness

The Sweltering heat exhibits me to lethargy Lying under cooler I sup juice for energy Without going out to play: I feel like dipping in bay Wish to swim along with my lover in synergy. 3-6-2020 4th place in the Contest. Note: The Summer laziness poetry Contest Sponsored by Mohan Chutani

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Date: 6/22/2020 1:07:00 AM
I love how your summer laziness finds energy in love. This is beautiful and witty. Congratulations on your win Deepa :)
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Date: 6/22/2020 4:18:00 AM
Hello Aditi mam, Thankyou for the generous appreciation. Lol, Am glad you found secret of my energy:-D It's a witty one like you said;-) Best wishes for you too.:-) Take care.Much love~Deepa
Date: 6/19/2020 4:04:00 PM
That's all I want to do in a heatwave, stay cool in the pooL lol. Or sea. Congrats on your win Tom
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Date: 6/20/2020 5:01:00 AM
Hello sir, LoL..Yes, we all do expect the same. Pool sounds safer than Sea.:-) Thankyou for the kind appreciation sir:-) Take care.Warm regards~Deepa
Date: 6/19/2020 8:10:00 AM
A swim in summer is just brilliant! Congrats on your placement Deepa and a nice limerick.
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Date: 6/19/2020 2:13:00 PM
Hello sir, Thankyou very much sir.:-) I am pleased to know that you liked my work. Best wishes for all your works too.:-) Take care.Warm regards~Deepa
Date: 6/18/2020 8:29:00 PM
Deepa, a sweet limerick. Found energy recouped after lazing and swimming along with a loved one. Congratulations for your placement in my contest. Best. Mohan.
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Date: 6/19/2020 2:10:00 PM
Hello sir, Thanks a bunch.:-) I am glad that my work was worth to be placed amidst such wonderful contenders. You and your Contest inspired me to write this first Limerick:-) Thanks for your kind appreciation. Good luck for all your works too. Take care.Warm regards~Deepa
Date: 6/8/2020 9:02:00 PM
Hmm.. there is no better way to sum up laziness in summer. Great write. I am wishing you goodluck in the contest.
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Date: 6/9/2020 9:57:00 AM
Oh..that's so kind of you Sir.:-) Thankyou very much for stopping by..and giving me your soulful appreciation and blessings.:-) Good luck for all your works too. Take care.Warm regards~Deepa.