Summer Hills With Daffodils Bloom

I planted the Daffodils in the hills, 
You were thrilled as daffodil flowers bloom, 
Amonst the sunny summer fields, 
Our room filled with perfume of golden yellow, 
With view of dew crystals cover the meadows. 
Oh joy.... 
 
You planted the Jasmine along the fences, 
I loved the scent of white night flowers, 
Our lives are entwined, two lovers devined, smitten by love. 

I planted the Cypresses along the paths, 
Across the way from the garden arches, 
Amongst the white Jasmine arbors,
And blue Sweet Lavenders near the Junipers. 

You were thrilled at the sights of yellow and gold, 
Our hearts growed and filled with joy, 
Amongst the pretty flowers and brown soils, 
We toiled and planted in the sun. 

Raindrops mist turn to showers in the early fall, 
Water fills the swollen creek, 
You were thrilled at the Golden Poppies, 
Red bright petals peeked at the morning sun, 
Amidst the sound of swishing hummingbirds, 
Perching on the sweet vines of Morning Glories. 

Spring came with her rain, it's drenching, 
Pouring droplets and wet my face, 
Rain water fills the over flowing brooks, 
Storybooks of river runs in the sun, 

Storms and vast gray skies whirlwind, 
Amid the freshness, the signing of my heart, 
As the Winter cold chill is over, 
So far vast above the horizon. 

Those Flowering Quints with Cinnamon mints, 
Giving Spring mist blisses in mid Summer, 
All over the garden, the flowers sprang, 

All that then was consumed by my heart, 
Green and blue the hues on facade turns, 
As water churning, dancing in the pond. 

You planted the Jasmine along the fences, 
I loved the scent of all the fragrances, 
Our lives are enriched and smitten then, 

Amongst the herbs and flowers show, 
In the middle of Daffodils meadows, 
As you promised to love me so, 
To no end .... 'til eternity. 

Jieranai (Jeri) Maier 
May-December @2003

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 8/28/2017 5:02:00 PM
A nice and sweet love poem and love story. Flowers can be very enriching indeed.
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Date: 8/28/2017 10:31:00 PM
Thank you very much Ronald. Very kind of you. This is my summer love poem with garden filled of beautiful flowers which I love.
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