Summer Hiku

clock free play days
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all ages nap

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Date: 8/7/2025 4:08:00 AM
Creative work you have penned in this one. Way to go on your winner. Congratulations!! Sara k
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Date: 8/7/2025 1:36:00 AM
What a wonderfully whimsical haiku! The playful layout and cheeky tone perfectly capture the spirit of carefree summer days. I especially loved the clever visual of “miles pursue” stretching out like a lazy chase! All ages nap — indeed, and deservedly so! Congratulations on this breezy and humorous piece — it made me smile. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/6/2025 4:14:00 PM
Big win for you, dear Ma'am CayCay. Huge congrats. Love~BFA
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Date: 10/1/2018 9:46:00 AM
Wonderful summer haiku< CayCay, You have captured summer in 3 lines,
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Date: 6/5/2018 8:47:00 PM
Congrats on your win, CayCay. Well done.
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Date: 6/3/2018 5:22:00 PM
I remember those times so well, Now for me summer is just another season since I don't go out in the sun any more! Would be fun to go to a beach though at least once in a blue moon. I miss you, Caycay!
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Date: 6/3/2018 1:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the summer haiku contest.
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Date: 6/2/2018 7:04:00 AM
- Congratulations on your Haiku with a great summer theme, CayCay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/28/2018 5:02:00 PM
Gotta love summer, Caycay!!! I used to live for it but now that I have removed myself from the sun, I just stay inside as always!! Glad you enjoyed my fall acrostic. I love coming up with a good acrostic.
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Date: 5/26/2018 11:54:00 AM
Never too old to enjoy yourself.
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Date: 5/23/2018 12:44:00 PM
You can't beat a great summer..
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Date: 5/23/2018 7:55:00 AM
You gotta love the summertime, best of luck, CayCay.
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Date: 5/21/2018 5:56:00 AM
Very nice, fun, haiku. I enjoyed :)
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Date: 5/21/2018 5:53:00 AM
Lovely :)
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Date: 5/21/2018 12:06:00 AM
How true, who looks at their watch when you're having a good time. Tom
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