Summer Hiku

clock free play days
* * * l * * a a * * n e * * d * ***** and ***** * s * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * s d m i l e s * p u r s u e
all ages nap
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Kendrick Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 4:08 AM
Creative work you have penned in this one. Way to go on your winner. Congratulations!! Sara k
Velasco Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 1:36 AM
What a wonderfully whimsical haiku! The playful layout and cheeky tone perfectly capture the spirit of carefree summer days. I especially loved the clever visual of “miles pursue” stretching out like a lazy chase! All ages nap — indeed, and deservedly so! Congratulations on this breezy and humorous piece — it made me smile. Congratulations!
Asuncion Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 4:14 PM
Big win for you, dear Ma'am CayCay. Huge congrats. Love~BFA
Doll Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 9:46 AM
Wonderful summer haiku< CayCay, You have captured summer in 3 lines,
Gauthier Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 8:47 PM
Congrats on your win, CayCay. Well done.
Dietrich Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 5:22 PM
I remember those times so well, Now for me summer is just another season since I don't go out in the sun any more! Would be fun to go to a beach though at least once in a blue moon. I miss you, Caycay!
Gentry Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 1:06 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the summer haiku contest.
Andresen Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 7:04 AM
- Congratulations on your Haiku with a great summer theme, CayCay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 5:02 PM
Gotta love summer, Caycay!!! I used to live for it but now that I have removed myself from the sun, I just stay inside as always!! Glad you enjoyed my fall acrostic. I love coming up with a good acrostic.
Inman Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 11:54 AM
Never too old to enjoy yourself.
One Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 12:44 PM
You can't beat a great summer..
Gondolf Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 7:55 AM
You gotta love the summertime, best of luck, CayCay.
Sands Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 5:56 AM
Very nice, fun, haiku. I enjoyed :)
Malik Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 5:53 AM
Lovely :)
Cunningham Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 12:06 AM
How true, who looks at their watch when you're having a good time. Tom
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