Summer Heat Flashbacks

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Dry heat cracked the ground;

Wet whips cracked ancestors’ backs—

Juxtaposed flashbacks:-

SUMMER HEAT FLASHBACKS… Dry heat cracked the ground; Wet whips cracked ancestors’ backs— Juxtaposed flashbacks:-

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Bill Baker

Date: 9/15/2022 3:42:00 PM

Great imagery and methaphors, Millard Enjoyed your Haiku, Bill

Millard Lowe
Date: 9/17/2022 6:12:00 PM

Thanks, Bill. Peace and Love.

Elizabeth Mccann

Date: 9/13/2022 3:10:00 AM

Quite an effective picture, Millard. Elizabeth

Millard Lowe
Date: 9/13/2022 6:38:00 AM

Thanks, Elizabeth. Pleased that this Haiku resonated with you. Peace and Love.