Summer Haiku

lullaby ocean
gently caressing my soul
nature's melody
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Marc Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 7:30 PM
Very soothing - nicely done Susan!
Pekrul Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 9:52 AM
I love Haiku and this is a good one. Very gentle and peaceful.
Jones Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 12:04 PM
Calming and peaceful. Thanks!
Adams Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 7:59 AM
Lovely Haiku, Susan.
Palli Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 2:41 AM
Thank you, Cona
Allison Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 3:16 PM
dropping back with my congrats it is a delight to read this again Susan:-) hugs jan xx
Palli Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 2:43 AM
Thanks, Jan!
Haight Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 3:27 PM
Excellent Haiku, Susan. Congratulations on your nice placement. Hugs, Sandra
Palli Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 2:43 AM
Thank you, Sandra!
Andresen Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 12:18 PM
- Congratulations on your Summer poems, Susan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Palli Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 2:42 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
May Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 9:55 AM
Beautiful haiku...Congrats on the win
Palli Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 2:42 AM
Thanks, Joseph!
Callus Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 8:55 AM
The summer serene ocean song...soothing to the senses; a delightful poem, Susan! Congratulations on a merited win. // paul
Palli Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 2:05 AM
Thanks, Paul! Congrats on your work! I like your style.
Dietrich Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 7:29 PM
This was lovely, Susan. Congrats in my contest.
Palli Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 1:19 AM
Thank you so much for inspiring my creativity, and placing my haiku! Andrea, you're work is awesome!
Allison Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 11:19 AM
absolutely beautiful imagery Susan a delight to read:-) hugs Jan xx7
Palli Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 7:53 AM
Thanks, Jan! Congrats to you!
Gazbowski Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 7:37 AM
Delightful haiku Susan.
Palli Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 1:53 PM
Thanks, Lenny!
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