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Summer Haiku

blue sky in your smile jingle in the flock of birds a struggle handsome ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ May 16, 2016 Summer Lovin' - Short Form Poetry Contest Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/21/2016 12:01:00 PM

- Congratulations on your Summer poems, Probir - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 5/21/2016 8:04:00 PM

Thank you Anne - Love...Probir

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2016 7:58:00 PM

Probir, those were sweet lines. I especially liked line one for imagery . Thanks for supporting my contest and congrats on HM

Probir Gupta
Date: 5/21/2016 2:05:00 AM

Thank you Andrea...

Tim Smith

Date: 5/16/2016 9:51:00 AM

Very beautiful Haiku Probir...love the blue sky in your smile

Probir Gupta
Date: 5/21/2016 2:06:00 AM

Thank you Tim..