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Summer Haiku

blue sky in your smile
jingle in the flock of birds
a struggle handsome
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May 16, 2016
Summer Lovin' - Short Form Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich

Copyright © Probir Gupta | Year Posted 2016

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Anne-Lise Andresen

May 21, 2016 at 12:01 PM

- Congratulations on your Summer poems, Probir - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

May 21, 2016 at 8:04 PM

Thank you Anne - Love...Probir

Andrea Dietrich

May 20, 2016 at 7:58 PM

Probir, those were sweet lines. I especially liked line one for imagery . Thanks for supporting my contest and congrats on HM

May 21, 2016 at 2:05 AM

Thank you Andrea...

May 16, 2016 at 9:51 AM

Very beautiful Haiku Probir...love the blue sky in your smile

May 21, 2016 at 2:06 AM

Thank you Tim..

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