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Summer Haiku

Virile croaking frogs Lyrical little sparrows Passion soaks my skin. Written 05/15/2016

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Paul Callus

Date: 6/1/2016 3:39:00 PM

What a beautiful three liner, Sara...the end line is especially captivating! // paul

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/21/2016 3:29:00 PM

Excellent Haiku, Sara. Congratulations on your nice placement. Hugs, Sandra

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/21/2016 12:13:00 PM

- Congratulations on your Summer poems, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2016 7:34:00 PM

I really love this, Sara. I wish someone had reminded you not to use capital letters in the front. This would have made top ten otherwise! Congrats on my winners' list.

Sara Chansarkar
Date: 5/21/2016 7:14:00 AM

Thanks Andrea,will be careful next time!

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/16/2016 10:41:00 AM

A lovely Haiku with great imagery, Sara. If it's for the contest, it is perfect. Lovely twist in imagery with the last line. Best wishes. 7, Hugs, Sandra

Sara Chansarkar
Date: 5/16/2016 10:50:00 AM

Thanks a lot Sandra!

Barry Stebbings

Date: 5/15/2016 1:17:00 PM

Nicely written expression of Summer, Sara. I like this.

Sara Chansarkar
Date: 5/16/2016 8:23:00 AM

Thanks Barry!