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Summer Haiku

Virile croaking frogs
Lyrical little sparrows
Passion soaks my skin.

Written 05/15/2016

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Paul Callus

June 1, 2016 at 3:39 PM

What a beautiful three liner, Sara...the end line is especially captivating! // paul

Sandra Haight

May 21, 2016 at 3:29 PM

Excellent Haiku, Sara. Congratulations on your nice placement. Hugs, Sandra

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 21, 2016 at 12:13 PM

- Congratulations on your Summer poems, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

May 20, 2016 at 7:34 PM

I really love this, Sara. I wish someone had reminded you not to use capital letters in the front. This would have made top ten otherwise! Congrats on my winners' list.

Sara Chansarkar

May 21, 2016 at 7:14 AM

Thanks Andrea,will be careful next time!

Sandra Haight

May 16, 2016 at 10:41 AM

A lovely Haiku with great imagery, Sara. If it's for the contest, it is perfect. Lovely twist in imagery with the last line. Best wishes. 7, Hugs, Sandra

Sara Chansarkar

May 16, 2016 at 10:50 AM

Thanks a lot Sandra!